by DAM Jul 28, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
As we sit and recollect on tha past |
by Jenna
I like this one! 5/5 Good Job! |
by Tatiana
How sweet...i like it 5/5 |
THE END WAS SOOO SWEET..AW |
by loviin hym
5/5 very good |
Much improved. :) I gave you a 3 on this one. The rhyming is a little off but for most people it is. It's much easier to read now that not everything is in capital letters. I woul prefer to see all of the words like i and i'm capitalized but it's a start. The message was pretty good as well. I really love that super women line. I recomend reading the poems of the contest winners. Experimenting with different poem subjects is good too. Keep on writting and trying to improve. |