The imagery was erfect throughout this definitly vivid and beautiful. The flow was again almost chant like you have real talent when it comes to making a poem flow and I admire that. A gorgeous poem. Which was interesting to read and didn't bore me from start to finish. Loved it. ~mel

What the crap is peoples problems!! I mean this is an awesome piece, so c'mon people take the time when you find one you like and FREAKING VOTE!! AWESOME JOB this is brilliant!