by Serina the Squid Jul 28, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I have seen green grass |
by Wallace
Amazing, filled with deep sadness and overflowing with talent. Excellent job, keep it up. |
by jenna grace
I liked how you said "your old life". |
by collin
Wow that is amazing truly masterful work your words flow together smoothly and it has a deep perspective keep up the great work |
by Kaila
Very good imagery |
by Michelle18
Great poem...i really liked it..and i liked the fact that it was true...i usually dont like poems that dont rhyme but this one just caught my attention.good job! 5/5 |