The rhyming and flow was spot on with this and was really smooth. Although the topic seemed some what cliche to me it was still a really nice written poem. I didn't loose interest at all throughout this and liked the length. Well done. ~mel

Ohhh. Yes. I absolutely friggin' love this poem.
LOVE IT.
Amazing.
Amazing.
So mean but ... amazinggg.
Lol.
Keep it up, dear.
xD

Wow...very impressive... i love it! and this one is also kinda different from other poems. good job.

Wow
this poem has left me speechless!
I loved it it's so angry and fast
with so much emotion
you did such a wonderful job
great work
5/5
kaila