Wow the emotion was so ....just came together i really felt the poem it really did touch me i can kinda relate but dont worry just stick it out and things will be great hang in there

Awww you poor poor thing.. i dont want to critisize this one .. because it comes from the heart.. which is amazing.. good poem and good luck

It is good you wrote how you felt this was a good poem 4/5 it flowed rather nicly good job!

This is great. You have the talent to write poems like a knife trough butter. The feelings are nicely described with a good word coice.

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Fsams

I know this feeling all to well...give up. Everyone deserves someone who will fight for them. I spent two years ogling over a guy who never dated anyone trying to get him to love me because, god, I loved him. In the end he chose some chik he barely knew and had only seen from a distance over the friend that had been there for years and sacrificed evrything for him. He just didn't love me. He never will. And now, I've found my true love. Still, I will never get rid of that scar. If ONLY I hadn't held on so tight for quite so long I wouldn't have been hit so hard. Because, really, I knew all along. Read my poem Hopeless. One of the few that doesn't rhyme.

It IS great! This is just the way I feel: Invisible... :'(
My fav part:
I lye in bed for hours thinking about how much I love him and why.
I feel invisible when he looks at me. But I am invisible, always will be.
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I loved it. 5/5
Keep up the amazing job.

Lye=lie.

amazing poem, dear.
i really really enjoyed it.
it kinda has this odd flow though, but it was good. if that makes sense?

keep it up.

Heartfelt, and it gives that familiar pain that we have all felt before. The words are simple, but plainly protray the pain of a crush that we will never have.

Look i have had this feeling before and i know it sucks. in fact i feel that way right now. Oh well life goes on and . . . . well you know.
great poem i realy felt it.
:~)Sam Mayo

I felt like this once. I hated that feeling. You expressed the feeling very well and the flow was absolutely perfect. 5/5

And yet another breath taking poem. I like the way you write your poems. They're full of emotion. You've got great talent. 5/5

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Awwz ive been there b4....but in the end i had him....ask him if he liikes u!! u could be surprised!

Really good poem!! lots of emotion and tells how u feel! amazing!