by Lonely Little Dreamer Jul 28, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I walk as a shadow. |
That was magnificent, beautiful wording, easy to relate to. Written smoothly, the words went together. It just had a fabulous word flow. Very good Job, and continue to write for years to come, I enjoy reading them |
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this is so sad. I loved the raw emotion in this piece. My favorite stanza is: |
by rhonyl
What a nice poem! Are you really that forgotten? heheh! |
by Jaime
This is amazing. period. :) keep up the amazing work |
by Veamm
Unique..i can see a different style in this! |