Forgotten Child

by Lonely Little Dreamer   Jul 28, 2007


I walk as a shadow.
Empty within this living shell.
From moment to moment.
Alive yet untouchable.

Two eyes without a soul.
Wandering lost among the crowd.
Unnoticed and ignored.
Like an old warn out doll.

Unwanted by family.
No friends would claim me.
Hopeless and heartless.
Broken beyond repair.

A cold breeze flows by.
Sweeping me away to nothingness.
Not even a shadow remains.
My existence erased from a page.

Unwritten my life now is.
Forgotten by all I loved.
No fleeting thoughts or cares.
About the girl that I once was.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    That was magnificent, beautiful wording, easy to relate to. Written smoothly, the words went together. It just had a fabulous word flow. Very good Job, and continue to write for years to come, I enjoy reading them

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is so sad. I loved the raw emotion in this piece. My favorite stanza is:
    "I walk as a shadow.
    Empty within this living shell.
    From moment to moment.
    Alive yet untouchable."

    It was so powerful, it made me want to read more. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by rhonyl

    What a nice poem! Are you really that forgotten? heheh!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jaime

    This is amazing. period. :) keep up the amazing work

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Unique..i can see a different style in this!
    same as your old ones..it describes well your ideas

    keep it up!

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