5/5

Woow I loved it, it was beautiful, yet sad and depressing but the structure was great and its flow keep up the good work, read mine and comment im positive u could relate to them.

Luv Fay.

A MAZ ING

It's good.

--lindsey

Awesome, I love the line " I feel like this faded picture..."

Wow nice poem it has so much meaning to it well keep up the good work I gave u a 5/5 :)
-Shanel-

Aww Dang sounds like whoever it is isn't being so kind with your heart. Breaking it and leaving scars when it finally heals. Its good to let it go, Hold onto it to long and you'll never be able to heal. Also sounds like you need someone to repaint you and maybe then you wont feel like a faded picture. Someone to put a smile back on your face and give you a place close to them so you don't feel so far away. 5/5 You always have me as a friend :) Remember I'm here your not drifting no farther :P lol Excellent poem Wake! ^_^