That was good well written good job
5/5
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Hmm...its good..
ur poem makes me think alot..
nicely writen,i like the flow and way u wrote it..
overall it was great!!
keep it up..

Very diverse style, it's cool. i can tell you know a lot about this. the arrangement was different but refreshing. and it kinda rhymes! which would be for me an achievement coz i cant really rhyme much.well done.=)

Amazing! an absolutely stunning poem left me with a lot to think on =D
loved it keep it up =D
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