When he....

by Niesha   Jul 28, 2007


When he looks at me he sets my soul on fire...
And all my pores start to drip with desire.
When he comes near me I become senseless, my heart begins to tremble...
And I become defenseless.
My breathe comes viscid, the passion for him starts to course beneath my skin...
And I crave for him to go places no one has ever been.
When he touches me, my eyelids close without my consent...
And all the hairs on my body rise without a moments resent.
When he kisses me the serum from within starts to serge...
And this is when I become his and tell him to take me and let our bodies merge.

(This is the first poem that I posted on here...let me know what ya'll think..)

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  • 17 years ago

    by T babyluv

    Wow dat waz really gud keep written i was feeling that word!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Good job expressing the love. Keep writing.

    Nazeer

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Wow! This is an incredible one! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ajmal

    Wow...Do u know what i liked most..about this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    I liked it very much.