by Vincent Thornsberry Jul 28, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Pain, anguish, lies and deceit, |
by 4 track demo
Dont underestimate yourself, i thought it flowed just fine, and the content was pretty damn cool, i enjoyed it, and was happy that you commented on one of mine, otherwise i would never of had the privledge to read it, very well done... |
by Michelle18
This poem is good...and very intense...the flow is good near the beginning but toward the end it got kinda shakey...but overall i say its a pretty good poem.i still give you a 5/5 |
by FallenGrace
I liked how you portrayed the story, reminded me of shakespear's Julius Ceaser... |