I liked how you portrayed the story, reminded me of shakespear's Julius Ceaser...
i think its well written, until the last stanza, which ends quite abruptly.
otherwise great poem =]
xxx

This poem is good...and very intense...the flow is good near the beginning but toward the end it got kinda shakey...but overall i say its a pretty good poem.i still give you a 5/5

Dont underestimate yourself, i thought it flowed just fine, and the content was pretty damn cool, i enjoyed it, and was happy that you commented on one of mine, otherwise i would never of had the privledge to read it, very well done...
john