"the pain of love wasn't worth it
because there she lays
with her unopened eyes"

I really didnt expect the ending. This is a truly tragic poem, yet written in a beautiful way. I think this can teach people, that love is not always bliss, and in the life of reality, not everything ends "happily ever after"

Take Care.

Andrew
Wow very deep and intense piece. Heartbreaking write.
Excellent!
Take Care Cindy

It was really sad. yet it is so honest, woman and man just take the beatings because they are to scared to leave. i know i was. but i thought it had a powerful message. 5/5