Solar Smile - Haiku

by Gem   Jul 28, 2007


Beaming down upon us
The great Sol shines with beauty
Loving solar smile

*Gem*
Copyright©GemmaStott2007

Haiku - A Japanese form of poetry. It has to be about nature and the syllable count is 5-7-5

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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I love nature poems and I`ve never seen a haiku especially for the solar universe..weird because it is just beautiful..as was this Haiku, I`ve always loved haikus..short but so powerful. Great job Dear !

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Krazy

    Simple and sweet, a very decadent treat. loved it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by anthony

    U got any poems u want me 2 look at gemma ?? xD im back

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a beautiful Haiku, I think it suits the season =)

    TC

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