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Your poem make alo of sense i absolutly loved it
Kudos

Nicely done, empowering! You could add more parts to it, but it's on a good track. :]

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blush

I like it, and yea, it be cool to have like more parts

Your poems come from your heart, Good job keep it up!

5/5

Such a good poem! its good to see that you have self confidence! i love it sweetie your an amazing writer keep it up : )