I'll remember

by Marius Laun   Jul 28, 2007


Your shining hair
and sparkling eyes,
A special aura
that never dies.

Your lovely smile
That put me in space,
Your warming touch
and stunning grace

When we first met
The smile on your face
Our first "I love you's",
And our final embrace

These things, I'll remember
Till the end of time
I had your love,
and you had mine

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  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    So sweet kind of pushing cutesy, but it works. The flow was great. Message was good. 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    This was really sweet!...good job!!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Yvonne

    Aw! Cute! It was so simple, and yet so beautiful! Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    Concise yet it held vast meanings. I really love the way it flowed and simplicity of each line. Not bad at all. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Fist two stanzas are incredible and they are written amazingly. Last two stanzas are bad. This is just my opinion but I think that you could write them better. 4/5

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