Wow, what a wonderful poem. I love the flow. Great job!! Keep it up.

Now this is a very good poem. Short, sweet and succinct. Well ordered too. Great job!

A shorT buT beautifuL piecE 5/5 brilliantlY penneD. keeP writinG!

Aww...short and soo sweet...i love it...i know that a lot of people can relate to this poem and i really like you put your words...Great flow and get emotion and use of words...sorry i had to say it again! lol but yea 5/5

Excellent. 5 as usual. :) I need to remember that small poems are good poems too.

The way that you felt, and all the emotion put into this poem made it all the better. Great write, if I could give you a six then i would!

I had to say more, the second time i read this it hit me so much more. It's like left overs, the more times you eat it, the better it tastes. Anyway, I just wanted to thank you for writing all of these poems. they are so great, and they always hit me so hard. I think that you are a beautiful poet, and musician, and that you will excel greatly in your life. :)

Omg, i loved it. it was amazing, it was sweet and than at the end you said the final embrace and wow. it was so emotional and deep. great work 5/5

This is amazing. i absolutely love it! the flow was great and so was the wording. and it helped a lot that i know how that feels.

This poem was quite the enjoyable read. The word choice was simple and effective the flow chanting. A sweet piece which was fully of love and great emotions. Well done on writing this poem. Keep up the good work. ~mel

So simple yet so elegant! I loved it :) I smiled the whole way through. Nice work!

Fist two stanzas are incredible and they are written amazingly. Last two stanzas are bad. This is just my opinion but I think that you could write them better. 4/5

Concise yet it held vast meanings. I really love the way it flowed and simplicity of each line. Not bad at all. 5/5

Aw! Cute! It was so simple, and yet so beautiful! Keep writing!

This was really sweet!...good job!!
5/5

So sweet kind of pushing cutesy, but it works. The flow was great. Message was good. 5/5 from me.