The Look

by Serina the Squid   Jul 28, 2007


Keep my simple soft
Eyes will seek for you
My sanctuary; kisses
and only love is true

Hands, soft skin, and tendrils
of silky, soft, wild hair
Consume me, eyes, consume me
Forever hold me there

Feeling warmth inside your arms
My body craves your roads
Travel, when you touch me
and, love, my heart explodes

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    I love it

  • 17 years ago

    by Angela

    Omg.. your bf is soo lucky to have such a talented writter.. and one that writes about him.. i love this one too.. and is also going in my favorites.. good job!!
    i love that you guys do this together!!.. haha i just got my ex bf ( but still a best friend ) to join.. and for reasons like this..
    sooo cute
    good job :)
    <3 ang
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aww this is so cute!
    but yet it's really passionate
    I don't know how you got it to sound
    almost like you needed him but it was good
    and I loved it
    your a great writer with real talent
    keep it up
    5/5
    kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    It doesn't make sense. That's why I like it. ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This poem is good...the ending is the best part...but there is one thing that really stood out to me...the first line..as soon as i read it i was like..hmm..does this make sense...to me it didnt...but i give this poem a 4/5