Wow.
I really, really, really liked this poem.
Short and sweet, just like most of yours are.
Umm. I think it should be 'sanctuary' not santuary.
If that's what you mean, of course.
Other than that it was justa bout perfect. :]

Keep it up dear.
xD

I think I'm the typo queen lol.

I liked this poem I found it to be short and sweet although the emotions didn't seem to jump out at me for some reason. I just couldn't feel them. Still it was a nice dedication to your bf which i'm sure loved the poem alot. ~mel

This poem is good...the ending is the best part...but there is one thing that really stood out to me...the first line..as soon as i read it i was like..hmm..does this make sense...to me it didnt...but i give this poem a 4/5

It doesn't make sense. That's why I like it. ^^

Aww this is so cute!
but yet it's really passionate
I don't know how you got it to sound
almost like you needed him but it was good
and I loved it
your a great writer with real talent
keep it up
5/5
kaila

Omg.. your bf is soo lucky to have such a talented writter.. and one that writes about him.. i love this one too.. and is also going in my favorites.. good job!!
i love that you guys do this together!!.. haha i just got my ex bf ( but still a best friend ) to join.. and for reasons like this..
sooo cute
good job :)
<3 ang
5/5

I love it