Comments : Maybe in a few

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Wow.. this one.. i think.. is just,, WOW

    loved the stanzas ..

    They toke the love
    They inserted anger
    I feel undone
    And unable to handle
    Maybe in a few hourse and some medication
    Ill be just like new again

    .. great ending to the poem/./ nicely carried out ..

    amazing work .. totally relatable..

    Awesome(as usual)

    ~Wake~