Hehe it's cute!
I like it.
It's nice and simple
and the rhymes were good
nice work
5/5

LMFAO! Oh my gosh! It's also a tongue twister! Drinkdrankdrunk-jing-jeng-Ugh! T~T I meesed up. LOL. I'm adding this to my favs. 5/5

Ha ha ha lol this is kinda funny. You kept it short and sweet. :D. I like the repitition

Keep it up
Fsams

Hehehe. As long as you dont drive your car drinking because that is an offense

You're silly. You should make a long funny poem so there is more to critisize (<---ahhh how do you spell that!) Heh go read this one of mine---->Insane
I labled it under dark because it's kind of twisted. Should I switch it to funny? Oh yeah I shall give you a four. ---->4

LOL that is cute.. i think you should make another one but a lil longer...your a good writter if that could come to you in seconds...keep it up

Yeah, it is cute and simple indeed ^^ Hihi.

It was spontanous and really funny!

5/5 David

Lmao i was just thinking this would be a great poem to say when ur drunk :P

Mk, I think I got the idea correctly, now! Man, you sounded like a drunk. Ha! {;) Dismissing the usual poetry analysis, I took pleasure in reading such adorable children's verses as this. Cute is a nice word which bests describes this one, I believe.

Thanks for sharing.

*SMILEZ* I LUV IT!!!ITZ SO CUTE!!:]

Lol i love i am so adding it to my favs.

my question is whered it come from? lol and what were you doing lol kidding

Thats weird

Nice^^ haha

Aww it's cute. =P I think the rhymes were cute with the drunk and funk part lol. But the second line kinda made me go...huh? o.O It seemed a little long for the rest of the lines. Haha, good job. ^_^ 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Such a cute lil poem!! It was so amusing, I think I actually laughed out loud. haha. Good job.

Aww so cute
the rhyming is very cute
good job

That's adorable.. I love the flow. If that came to you in seconds, I find you incredibly talented.

I thought it was actually a really great
short poem
and the simplicity was nice
and the bluntness
tied it all together

Well i like the idea of it
and the rhyming was good

5/5

I like that it rhymes, but a little too short.