Light

by Serina the Squid   Jul 28, 2007


Fire, fire
Take my soul
Burn me, burn me
Devour me whole

Fire, fire
Love and flames
Take me, tame me
Steal my names

Fire, fire
Dance inside me
Caress and kiss me
Burn me free

Fire, fire
Heat my night
Kill me, steal me
Give me light

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Woah this was really really good!
    I loved the repitition of the same line over and over. and i liked when you repetated the same phrase in the same line ex.
    Burn me, burn me
    anyways this poem was really good
    nice work
    5/5
    kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is alot different from anything i've read.. and thats a good thing..i love reading new and different poems...i really like it..good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wahooo! This one is different and it is a beautiful variety I would say. Great rhymes and the rhythm is cool. 5/5 all the way

    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow.
    The flow to that was like utterly amazing.
    It's not your best, but it's really really really really great.

    Keep up the great work dear.
    xD

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    The word choice throughout this poem was really simple yet so effective. I liked the flow it was definitly smooth and seemed almost like a chant to me in its own way. An enjoyable read you have here. Well done. ~mel