by Serina the Squid Jul 28, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Fire, fire |
by Kaila
Woah this was really really good! |
by Michelle18
This is alot different from anything i've read.. and thats a good thing..i love reading new and different poems...i really like it..good job. |
by Fsams
Wahooo! This one is different and it is a beautiful variety I would say. Great rhymes and the rhythm is cool. 5/5 all the way |
by Teria
Wow. |
by Melpomene
The word choice throughout this poem was really simple yet so effective. I liked the flow it was definitly smooth and seemed almost like a chant to me in its own way. An enjoyable read you have here. Well done. ~mel |