The word choice throughout this poem was really simple yet so effective. I liked the flow it was definitly smooth and seemed almost like a chant to me in its own way. An enjoyable read you have here. Well done. ~mel

Wow.
The flow to that was like utterly amazing.
It's not your best, but it's really really really really great.

Keep up the great work dear.
xD

Wahooo! This one is different and it is a beautiful variety I would say. Great rhymes and the rhythm is cool. 5/5 all the way

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This is alot different from anything i've read.. and thats a good thing..i love reading new and different poems...i really like it..good job.

Woah this was really really good!
I loved the repitition of the same line over and over. and i liked when you repetated the same phrase in the same line ex.
Burn me, burn me
anyways this poem was really good
nice work
5/5
kaila