by Serina the Squid Jul 29, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Mocking me, mocking me |
by Jenni Marie
Okay. I LOVE this. |
by Kaila
Wow! |
Why would people find that offensive? I'm not using the word gay in the slang meaning of it, I'm using it in its actual definition, which means happy. |
by Michelle18
This poem is good...the flow was good and the rhyming was great....theres just one problem to me... |
Hahaha, oh my, thats funny. I was using "gay" like in olde english when it mean whimsical since the writing in that line and even using that word makes it whimsical, or at least I felt it did when I wrote the poem :) |
I had a lot of trouble with the last three lines...and I don't think they flow at all |