WOw. I love it.
It's quite good, and many poets/writers can relate to this poem.
The flow and everything you mentioned throughout it is perfect though.
Lol.
So, it kind of defeats the poem. :/
BUT. It doesn't in the same way.
If that makes sense.

I had a lot of trouble with the last three lines...and I don't think they flow at all

This poem is good...the flow was good and the rhyming was great....theres just one problem to me...

"Try flimsy, gay rhyme"

some people may find that offensive... gay rhyme? maybe you should change that word to something different..but its just a suggestion...overall great poem.

Why would people find that offensive? I'm not using the word gay in the slang meaning of it, I'm using it in its actual definition, which means happy.

Wow!
this poem is excellent!
I've been feeling just like this.
Like everything that comes to my head doesn't fit.
So I know what your going through
you really captured what it's like to not be able to write but want to so badly
5/5
kaila

Okay. I LOVE this.

You did a wonderful job with this piece, and if you WERE suffering with block when you wrote this, I think you did a fantastic job anyway.

I wanted to copy my favourite part...but that would be the whole poem.

Perfect flow throughout and beautifully written, this is a wonderful read.