You're my idle, Teria.
How did you rhyme that so well?!
Truly, this one was amazing.
The depth and insight were grand.
You did wonders with this one.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5

I love this poem.

And, the little things that taunt me ruin my whole day,
as the larger things that follow me corrupt my yesterday.

These are the two strongest lines, they flow the best, and the message is clear and strong. (But there shouldn't be a comma after And lol)

It wasnt what i expected it to be! but i liked it def 5/5!!!!!

And, the little things that taunt me ruin my whole day,
as the larger things that follow me corrupt my yesterday.

Firstly, the title really caught my eye, so I must congratulate you on coming up with such a unique yet captivating title. Now i'll start on the poem lol. It was brilliant. The rhyme and flow was quite good which kept me hooked from beginning to end. Loved every line of it, loathe you for writing such a fantastic poem:)

You are a talented poet!
Take Care.

WoW well i have to give it to you-this poem was amazing! I love the way you used you words{again} and i loved the way you ryhmed! You are amazing! 5/5

"The perfection in each flaw corrects the worlds mistakes,"
^ It's strange to note each flawless flaw corrects the flaws of this world. Ironic it is.

"And, the little things that taunt me ruin my whole day,
as the larger things that follow me corrupt my yesterday."
^ Ah! That couplet is smashing, sweets. It encompasses so much power and meaning and emotion. Absobloodylootely brilliant. I'll give you props for that. ;]

I liked this one better, m'dear. Sweltering emotions were blaring throughout the page. It's very poignant; and I liked it. When you stated, "Reminding me that my photoshop tastes like beverage.", it gave me an impression of bittersweet aftertaste. Figuratively. The subject you had portrayed in this work seemed miserable with her unhappy life, whereas your portrayal of herself was quite excellent. I enjoyed it, nevertheless. Thanks for sharing! ~Marian

The poem was very good, though I did get confused at the end. hahaha still a well written poem.

I liked this one, and the title was brilliant, though my friend, you did manage to create something out of it that i wouldnt have expected from anyone else.
Brilliant!!
Tara-Kay
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