Comments : Foolish luv

  • 17 years ago

    by SuicideNotes2Poems

    Realy sab and compleat poem
    the ending makes it happy again
    but realy good job 5/5 =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow this poem was really good i can reate to.
    "You destroyed all of my dreams,
    My nightmares became reality,
    Where darkness is more than it seems,
    Where you drove me to insanity. "

    yup i can really relate....if this is from experiance on your part than i can assure you things will get better.

    5/5
    laura