I'm gonna make it through [[NumberThree]]

by Teria   Jul 29, 2007


Okay, this is the third poem. The second poem goes back to the third and fourth stanzas in my FIRST poem. This poem goes back to the LAST stanza in my FIRST poem. I will also have two more poems; one of which goes back to the first two, and another that goes back to the last one again. [[This one repeated with a few changes]].

The last stanza in the first poem :
"I'm searching for my right,
to run from all you've given.
I'm gonna make it through,
in this confusing life I'm livin'. "

- - - -
I'm gonna make it through [[NumberThree]

For, it's that I have left,
and it's all that I shall need.
I'm running down the path,
that all the good do lead.

I'm searching for my right,
to never break apart again.
I'm searching for my right,
to trust my very best friend.

I'm going to have it all,
and always do what's right.
I'm going to win it all,
in this hard to win fight.

I have hope and faith and love,
and the family that I need.
I'm running down the path,
that all the good do lead.

I hope you understand,
that this is my perfection.
To push away the boy,
that made me fear rejection.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Its sounds loyal and full of confusion, as if you're bending for the approval of others but not really thinking for oneself. A good poem. I've noticed you have a knack with last stanzas. They go BOOM! It's wonderful, but work on getting the REST of the poem to flow so well.