by Teria Jul 29, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Okay, this is the third poem. The second poem goes back to the third and fourth stanzas in my FIRST poem. This poem goes back to the LAST stanza in my FIRST poem. I will also have two more poems; one of which goes back to the first two, and another that goes back to the last one again. [[This one repeated with a few changes]]. |
Its sounds loyal and full of confusion, as if you're bending for the approval of others but not really thinking for oneself. A good poem. I've noticed you have a knack with last stanzas. They go BOOM! It's wonderful, but work on getting the REST of the poem to flow so well. |