Hark Ye, Into the Slumber Deep [Tetralight]

by Twisted Heart   Jul 29, 2007


Hark ye, into the slumber deep
Dark angel of the dreary night
Mend tattered souls of lovers lost
With faded misty lullabies.

With faded misty lullabies
Mend tattered souls of lovers lost
Upon a shadows whispered breath
A single melody is caught.

A single melody is caught
Upon a shadows whispered breath
Inside the faded hearts collide
Consumed by this the final death

Consumed by this the final death
Inside the faded hearts collide
A feigning conqueror of sleep
As shadows cross the haunted eyes.

As shadows cross the haunted eyes
A feigning conqueror of sleep
Dark Angel of the dreary night
Hark ye, into the slumber deep.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a stunning Tetralight. Imagery and word choices are excellent. Wonderful flow. Jeannie you have so much talent I stand in awe.
    ~BRAVO~
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    This was fabulously imaginative! So good...

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    I agree, how you've worded the poem is just marvellous. The form seems to be strict, yet you have done an excellent job. This poem has also opened my mind to the many different ways of writing poetry. So thanks for that:)

    Take Care.