I agree, how you've worded the poem is just marvellous. The form seems to be strict, yet you have done an excellent job. This poem has also opened my mind to the many different ways of writing poetry. So thanks for that:)

Take Care.

This was fabulously imaginative! So good...

What a stunning Tetralight. Imagery and word choices are excellent. Wonderful flow. Jeannie you have so much talent I stand in awe.
~BRAVO~
Love Cindy