Yay! First comment. Gosh, I love NYC and you did a great job at describing the Big Apple. Titles... you always have such great titles... umm... I really don't know if they are any good, but I'll list the ones that I came up with.

Secrets Of The Metroplex
Music Of The City
Bring Back The Beats Of Yesturday

I like the first one the best, but then again, I was never good at titles. :P

Great job Sheena!! :]
Ciao

The title doesnt fit it i think thats why its called untittle cuz u dont now a name for it! but idk otherwise thes poem was unique and have strong us of words 5/5

I think it's pretty good. I loved the words you used in the poem. Metroplex...I just like that word. It makes me happy. :) But no seriously I did like some of the words you used. The blood cells line is one of my favorites. 5.