I really like the first stanza it seems to really stand out to me! i like this one the flow is good! 5/5

I like this poem its really good, the flow was almost perfect and i love the use of words...I really like the first couple stanzas are great!

The flow was a bit off towards the end, but that last stanza nailed it. 5/5 m'dear.

To be honest, I didn't fully understand "the bright side of mourning", and I felt quite miserable. Though you presented fine points throughout. If you have time, will you please explain this to me through PM? I'd appreciate it, and would return to give you a fine review, most likely.