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by ShootingStar Jul 29, 2007 category : Friendship, family / family
"Daddy..." i haven't asked.He's gone Left me sitting right there. I just want to say Tomorrow is my birthday Why are you always busy? It takes mommy crazy. She said you're the jerk You stay at home for once a week only Do you still remember me? Your daughter,Grace. When I look at your face... You are tired. You worked so hard because of us I wont blame you I'll always love you But I'm afraid Afraid would I forget who you are after a year I don't want to I hope we're still a family Okay then I'll pay for you So can you stay with us for a day? Please,I almost forget your voice already.
by lish
Really well written 5/5 from me
by oddi tea
Good work, gets a bit uneasy in the middle but you finished it off great! Keep writing and you really will go far!