Broken pieces

by libby   Jul 29, 2007


Pieces of heart
broken so vainly
thrown apart remembering faintly.

forgotten tears
come back this day
trembling in fear
i kiss them away.

ripped out memories
like a burning page
the feeling never leaves
but my minds in a cage

slowly dying
from the poision of trust
helplessly trying
but the pieces are crushed.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Loved it! I would just fix your first stanza so you've got the four lines instead of three to fit the rest of the poem. Other than that...beautiful!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Woe

    Wow. you have talent.. i like the short lines.. it makes it easier to read but it has so much feeling that it seems longer.. i love it 5/5 but again, punctuation makes all the difference, really...

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