The dead of the night/the break of dawn.

by StoryOfAGirl   Jul 29, 2007


Part One- the dead of the night

Vivid memories crash down;
like rain hitting the windows,
feeling like hail against my head,
and an arrow through my heart.
Her words, slowly turning me inside out.
My whole world slowly falling apart.

The clock strikes
again, and
again.
Feeling a pulse run through my head.
Arriving right on time
in the dead of the night;
a friend.

Part Two- The break of dawn

Always there.
to catch me as im falling;
away
from all things great.
When suddenly you are there.
to help ease all the pain
away;

No longer falling,
The problems start to wash away,
like rain on a summer day
And suddenly,
everything goes away;
and her words forgiven;
but never forgotten.
time will heal everything;
in the arms of;
My Best Friend.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Nice...great poem, keep up the good work. (^_^)

  • 16 years ago

    by rich sanchez

    Nice! i enjoyed the way you worded both parts and the similes that you used! keep up the good work! 5/5

    p.s.- feel free to comment or critique any of my poems if u want to :-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Littl3Pickl369

    O wow, very touching...you are a great writer, im jelous lol

    <Niki3
    PS comment back please:)