I wonder why the other commenter didnt vote to this one. I gave you 5/5 coz this one is superb. So creative and the imagery is great. The metaphorical content is nicely worded and the poem is cohesive.

Both poetically and lexically strong

Tc
Fsams

Well, this was truly a different take on your writing. It was interesting, yet, blunt in some places. Good work, though.

Alesia <3