by Monica AKA Mika Jul 29, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Tears of joy fall from a mother's eyes as she looks into the face of her baby boy, |
This is such a sad poem! i like it alot tho. i dont know wht its like to lose son, but i know the feelin of not havin money and all that. im a single mom of a daughter of 16 months.. its crazi |
by bellATragedy
This is so sad and so true. 5/5 |
by Javier
This poem actually almost made me cry! Great Job! |
by Alissa
This was really good, the emotion was here and it flawless. Great job! |
by Fsams
The whole story flows so well and the whole poem is very cohesive making it an excellent well strung piece. Great 5/5 |