Wow.. Great Job =]]

Awww thats sad but its a great poem love it 5/5 and ur also hot btw!

* $heila *

WOW! Great poem 5/5 keep it up

Hey...this is a really great poem. is it aimed at anyone/anything inparticular?..you dont hav 2 answer that i just wondered! i love it...well done!! really gets the message across! anyway have a good one mate! Britt

This is a really cool poem u write so well keep up the good work

Wow this is very honest and real
i do like this one alot i give it a 5/5

laura

Aw I like the ending ;) we have a similar style in writing sad poems :) I think it was a nice poem, I have some suggestions though.. Try to put it into stanzas :) and try to use punctuations.

Nonetheless a good read.

I give five. Amazing writing !

Really good piece honestly very good writing!! you've done fantastic with this im not usually into suicide kind of poems but this was outstanding well worth the read!

Outstanding work!!! 5/5 such a beautioful rythem!... i LOVE the description and i can feel the pain inside it.. very well captured
-Marina

This poem makes me want to give you a hug. You sound so hurt. And I feel so awful for you. Like I said in before..you can always email.add.or pm me..I know just how your feeling..if your feeling like you are in what you write.

Wow...i love it <3