BeautifuL piecE 5/5 brilliantlY penneD. keeP writinG!

I actually liked it i didnt feel it at first but i read it again like you would aloud and it was good you did well seeing as i dont really like dark poems!

Sara great poem, keep it up. Thanks for the comments.

Great work.. loved the flow .. a brilliant write.. great start to it and nicely ended.. Loved It !

Keep it coming

~Wake~

VerY mucH fascinatinG. keeP yR writinG tO shimmeR likE aS thiS onE.... 5/5.

'feaR'

luzaN