I like the flow in your poems! They are really good. =) And that's why I wish your poems would be a little longer.. cause you really have the talent to write longer poems =] There's nothing I could say that would make it better. =) I love it.
5/5

Wow.
I really really like this poem.
its' quite amazing.
Maybe capitalization would help the flow a bit?
I'm not sure though, BUT the flow is fine.
Dont' get me wrong.
xD
goodjob.

Wonderful! And finally a poem that flowed flawlessly!

Angela,

This piece was real nice. How lovely. =] The idea of finding your spirit guide (or inner self) in the fullness of time really appealed to me. There's nothing much to critique about your poems, since most of them are simply well-written, comprehensible, and quite enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing, m'dear.

Take care,
Marian

I liked this one, it was different from lots of other poems....good job

5/5

Aww it's sweet. :) I'll give it a four.

I loved it
my favorite lines are
you're headed the right way
she became my heart and soul that night
she's been with me everyday

well done
keep the good work up
5/5
your friend
Rohan:-)

Another short and yet beautiful poem. I love the originality I see with all of your writing so far. You have a great talent! 5/5

marcella

The flow was nearly flawless and the stanzas were pretty good.I just wish it wasn't so short.All in all though it was a brilliant write.4/5