This one is good but appears just a bit rough...would be much better if it were smoother.

This is an excellent poem that is a perfect and sweet tribute to your friend.

5/5 David

A beautiful tribute to your friend. Rhyme scheme was good but it was indeed a little rough. However that is more than made up for by the fact that it is brimming with emotion. He's lucky to have a friend who cares so much about him. :)

I love the poem you wrote it bought tears to my eyes you are a very special and caring person in my troubled life ,thank you very much for all your thoughts and words of wisdom Your Bub xxxx forever. 5/5

So sweet, I'm sure your friend is really happy with it. He's lucky to have you.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Awww very nice tribute babe :)

An excellent tribute to a dear friend.
The rymthing was awesome. The flow a little off but you can play around with it. The poem was still a memorable peice, by the emotion's you weaved through each line.
HE truly is lucky.
Well done,
and keep writting,
Elaine.

Very beautiful poem expressing true friendship. I loved the way words strung each other. The flow and the word choice is great 5/5

Tc
Fsams

It's really amazing to know that somebody cares for you so much, and the only thing greater is knowing you feel the same for them. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

Isn't it wonderful to know you have a friend like that! Someone who will always be there no matter what.... I'm sure he knows how much you appreciate him. Well done.

Very nice tribute to your friend ( bub? what kind of name is that??)

5/5 Ingrid

Aww this is sweet...friendship poems always cheer me up when im feeling down.. and this one is great..

"promises they'd never be told."

^^maybe its just me but in this line i think "promises" should be "promised"

but thats just what i think. it would sound better.

but overall this is a great poem.5/5

Aww thats so sweeet !
this poem is great !
definately =]

5/5

xo.louiii