I love this poem!! you are very creative!! great job!! keep up the good work! |
Aww. that was really cute. |
by A F
Very nice. ='] i liked it. |
by Becca
I really liked this poem. Perfect title for some great metaphors. Keep up the good work. |
Wow i really liked this poem...i get where you're going with this poem..excellent work...if you have msn you must add me...my email is on my profile...always Manda |
Love it |
I loved this poem more than your other one. You capitolized the first letter of every line. Just how I wanted you to do it with the other poem. Another excellent write. Short but yet written pretty well. 5/5. |
-Melting cubes, under sheets of glass, |