Comments : Metaphoric Love

  • 17 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    I love this poem!! you are very creative!! great job!! keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful and Crazy

    Aww. that was really cute.

  • 17 years ago

    by A F

    Very nice. ='] i liked it.
    reminds me of my ex though. ='[
    xxx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    I really liked this poem. Perfect title for some great metaphors. Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandz and Aly

    Wow i really liked this poem...i get where you're going with this poem..excellent work...if you have msn you must add me...my email is on my profile...always Manda

  • 17 years ago

    by Devil in The Night

    Love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I loved this poem more than your other one. You capitolized the first letter of every line. Just how I wanted you to do it with the other poem. Another excellent write. Short but yet written pretty well. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    -Melting cubes, under sheets of glass,
    Your reflection always shows.
    Your scent forever lingers,
    In a bud of a new born rose.-

    that is a beautiful stanza....