Blew by Love

You write such lovley poems about love. where you get your ideas i'll never know. great work

"Days they turn to nights,
Nights they turn to years."
`Maybe use that instead of they. Works better and sounds better.

"What seemed to happen a few time"
`times not time.. make it plural.

"Memories stayed so fresh,
Cemented in my mind."
`i love this. cemented. great word-choice mean the feelings and memories won't disappear they forever remain in your mind fresh.

"Feelings that were shared.
Up and left so fast,
I was unprepared."
`this is sad. but many of us go through the same feelings. very relatable lines.

overall, a good poem. it was simple, but you defaintly said waht was on your mind. good job. 5/5.

Beautifully sad. I'm sure so many people can relate to this piece. It was a gentle piece which created an adorable flow. Held together by a great word choice. Such a good read I have enjoyed reading your poems. Very touching and capturing. a 5/5 from me. ~mel

This is beautiful, very sad...it describes what I am afraid of!

It was a really good poem.. it kinda had a really gentle mood and flow to it... anyways a 5/5 from me really good = ] and really im not a fan of love poems