by June
That touched my heart and I could relate in a way.Very good. |
That was really good....i mean i was kind of going through that recently...so it really did speak to me.....i loved it.....really good.... |
Iv'e been moved. That was fantastic!!!!! |
by collin
This is a ver nice write the poem seams so close to home it has true feeling and thats what poems should be kudos keep up the good work |
by trent wolfe
Nice job thank you for commenting my work... You are talented at writing poems far better than I am... I hope that you update soon |
by corrina
This is amazing ! ... i love it ! ... keep it up xXx corrina xXx |
by jason
It was a really good poem.. it kinda had a really gentle mood and flow to it... anyways a 5/5 from me really good = ] and really im not a fan of love poems |
by TrueLover
This is beautiful, very sad...it describes what I am afraid of! |
by Melpomene
Beautifully sad. I'm sure so many people can relate to this piece. It was a gentle piece which created an adorable flow. Held together by a great word choice. Such a good read I have enjoyed reading your poems. Very touching and capturing. a 5/5 from me. ~mel |
"Days they turn to nights, |
You write such lovley poems about love. where you get your ideas i'll never know. great work |