Comments : Blew by Love

  • 17 years ago

    by June

    That touched my heart and I could relate in a way.Very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nea forever and ever

    That was really good....i mean i was kind of going through that recently...so it really did speak to me.....i loved it.....really good....

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxSurrenderToMyWrathxXx

    Iv'e been moved. That was fantastic!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by collin

    This is a ver nice write the poem seams so close to home it has true feeling and thats what poems should be kudos keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by trent wolfe

    Nice job thank you for commenting my work... You are talented at writing poems far better than I am... I hope that you update soon

  • 17 years ago

    by corrina

    This is amazing ! ... i love it ! ... keep it up xXx corrina xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by jason

    It was a really good poem.. it kinda had a really gentle mood and flow to it... anyways a 5/5 from me really good = ] and really im not a fan of love poems

  • 17 years ago

    by TrueLover

    This is beautiful, very sad...it describes what I am afraid of!

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Beautifully sad. I'm sure so many people can relate to this piece. It was a gentle piece which created an adorable flow. Held together by a great word choice. Such a good read I have enjoyed reading your poems. Very touching and capturing. a 5/5 from me. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "Days they turn to nights,
    Nights they turn to years."
    `Maybe use that instead of they. Works better and sounds better.

    "What seemed to happen a few time"
    `times not time.. make it plural.

    "Memories stayed so fresh,
    Cemented in my mind."
    `i love this. cemented. great word-choice mean the feelings and memories won't disappear they forever remain in your mind fresh.

    "Feelings that were shared.
    Up and left so fast,
    I was unprepared."
    `this is sad. but many of us go through the same feelings. very relatable lines.

    overall, a good poem. it was simple, but you defaintly said waht was on your mind. good job. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    You write such lovley poems about love. where you get your ideas i'll never know. great work