by Independence Forever Jul 29, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
I know a maid who never was right |
Aww i think this is very cute aww and i like the dedication |
by Gasttlee
Wow! powerful and deep! 5/5 |
I say get rid of that thorn in ur side. |
by Marc Ortiz
And last change the title to.. |
by Marc Ortiz
It was a great poem.. It flowed well, good job! I like the way you rhymed some lines, keep it up. |