by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Jul 29, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Yet there's no waiting; glass forms the place where we walk, |
by AlaSkA
How i love to read your so teedious(*?)-ly well thought out poems. i have to say i was just reading, and then the line "silent echos beat across your mind" hit me and i was like whoa. really nice line, it gives a sincere depth to it. great write. |
by Tricky Daze
It was all about certain sentences and some of them were so true that made me go wow |
Wow..this is incredible work -- you give it this complex feel without being too overbearing on the word choice...you don't cram it with metaphors and its pulled off effectively, amazing work |
Silent echoes beat across your mind; you're lost, I see; |
by aDORKable x3
Whoa. lol That's almost all I can say. This was another amazing poem m'dear. You have a true talent for writing, I'm not even kidding. The way that you can use the English language to describe that is just beyond me... Keep it up!!! |