WOW!! what a poem!! i never tried to comment on sucha rhyme... tho i just found that there is nothing to "Comment!" on...i just loved it. went easily through my mind felt the emotions very well. good use of language, chronological.. and as i said just lovable.
5/5

Whoa. lol That's almost all I can say. This was another amazing poem m'dear. You have a true talent for writing, I'm not even kidding. The way that you can use the English language to describe that is just beyond me... Keep it up!!!
Ciao<3

Silent echoes beat across your mind; you're lost, I see;
Tripping so delicately, blinking; lost in what?
that part stood out to me the most! i like how you bring up questions in this poem. this was an amazing write. the flow was great some nice rhymes and very strong use of words

Wow..this is incredible work -- you give it this complex feel without being too overbearing on the word choice...you don't cram it with metaphors and its pulled off effectively, amazing work

It was all about certain sentences and some of them were so true that made me go wow

One of them was;

Lost in love? Love was never there, my dear child
It was a lie. It was all a lie.

Keep writing sheena
Take care,
Laura

How i love to read your so teedious(*?)-ly well thought out poems. i have to say i was just reading, and then the line "silent echos beat across your mind" hit me and i was like whoa. really nice line, it gives a sincere depth to it. great write.

(:
Tom