I like this poem not to bad... I laughed at the gluttony part "giving your stomach a clutch" .. but overall good poem 5/5

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This is another good one too....tws a gr8 write indeed lol....ur flow was gr8 and it described them so well :D
keep it up bree

Yeaaaaaah i like it.
what an strange topic to write one.
its pretty cool

you should watch themovie seven if you haven't already its based on this :]

Good poem. 5/5