A Good Poem

by Serina the Squid   Jul 29, 2007


A good poem ends
with a
bang!
something solid
something
pow!
But lately
for me
It seems
I've lost
my
wow!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Angela

    ^^^^ what she said!!!
    called otomotopia?? i believe
    awesome expression.. you not losing your touch !!
    <3 ang

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh I'm pretty sure you haven't lost your wow.
    I forgot what it's called but I love the pow and bang sounds. They really brought this poem to life. and even though it was pretty short it was still an excellent poem!
    5/5
    kaila