Loving Someone

by Tears May Fall   Jul 30, 2007


As we sit on them swings,
He looks into my deep green sad eyes,
He asked "Is something wrong my love"
I keep looking at him as if he had said something stupid,

So he asked once more, "Is something wrong my love"
As my eyes began to tear up,
I said "Baby i love you with all my heart"
He looked at me and smiled,

I fear to tell him i thought in my head,
I fear it i thought,
I fear to loose what we have,
I fear he will go crazy,
I fear it all.

3 days later he called and no answer,
he Begin to call every day still he got no answer
He thought something was wrong,
He thought the worst of it all.

A couple days later he got a call,
the call was from the mother,
The mother of his girl,
she said "Allie needs u she wants u to come and see her"

He asked what is wrong,
She said once more "she needs you come to the hospital and ask for her room"
he hung up the phone and left.

As he pulled up to the the hospital,
He Begin to cry,
as he stopped he got out and went in to the office,
they gave the room # and what floor she was on.

He looked at the door hoping she was OK,
He walked in and she said "I love you"
He said "Are you OK"
He looked at her and Begin to cry.

She said i fear to tell u ,
I fear it, I just fear,
But she still Begin,
I am going to die,

I am going to die of Cancer,
And i dint know what to do,
she said "would u take a bullet for me,
He said "Hell yea i will"

she asked " do u love me"
he answered "yes i do and always will"
she said "I love you to and that what u need to know"
he grabbed her hand as she went away.

the next couple of days passed,
He didn't know what to do,
He Begin to think,
He thought he couldn't live.
So he hung himself in his room,
because he couldn't live with out his love.

if you love someone this much then this poem is to u.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Valerie

    WOW amazing poem! it literally made me cry.
    its very very well writen , another emotional poem uv writen, I like it cuz it shows how much the boy loved her and that theyll be together in heaven

  • 17 years ago

    by jason

    It was a pretty good poem but something about didn't seem right anyways i give it a 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    It was a nice story in a poem .. good job ..

    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Ajmal

    Wow...Do u know what i liked most..about this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

  • 17 years ago

    by katy

    WOW thats the first thought that came to my head when i read this poem omg its just so good i love it 5/5 xx