Life without a son

by XxLonelyLovexX   Jul 30, 2007


Trapped inside her fears
she doesn't move, not even a blink
she just waits and waits
as her whole life starts to sink

she didn't use to be this way
until life trapped her in
then everything just fell apart
leaving her to wonder if she'll win

there is not much she can do
now that life is not fun
all she wants is to run away
or for life to just be done

all she's left with is his memories
not just good but the times he deceived
leaving her crushed like that
destroying all she ever achieved

for her life seems to be over
all good has melted away
because everything seemed to end
when her son died today

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blake

    Wow that was like really good keep up the work

    5/5

    blake

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxXhes the everything i cudve asked forXxXx

    Gosh. that is sooo sad. like the others said..i hope its not true. cuz i get real emotional when a kid moves on. but this is really good and its emotionally powerful. keep it up

    ayshley

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Wow.. that was powerfull and really deep.. must say.. thats the best i've read today.. and i too hope thats not true.. but anyways.. its a wonderful piece.. made me feel and reached inside.. loved it

    keep up the great work
    5/5

    ~Wake~

  • 17 years ago

    by sheila

    Awwww thats sad but a great poem 5/5 but its really sad i hope it not true and if it is im so sorry keep it up =]

    * $heila *

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